RattyRea

Chapter 6: Vengeance Ridge and Lomadia had a plan. Ridge would distract Rythian while Lomadia would clear everyone out. Aw hell yeah, time for the best chapter in the whole story! Per my opinion. This chapter and chapter one are my favorites. It was strange, though. When Zoeya opened the door, she looked a bit surprised to see them, but when Rythian came up behind her and saw who had knocked on the door, his eyes went wide and his face went pale as if he had just seen death itself. “Hey Zoeya,” said Lomadia casually. “Can we talk?” “Uh, sure,” said Zoeya, glancing nervously at Ridge. I like how Ridge

Chapter 4: The Threat Rythian hovered silently over Owl Island. It had only been a day since the thief had stolen from him, and he was still wounded from the explosion and the skeleton. However, he just had to check and make sure... It's been quite a while since I did any commentary, so before writing this I went back and reread what I wrote about the chapters before. Man, I really roasted myself. Luckily I'm in a better mood tonight, so hopefully I'll have some actual commentary. Although my rage comments were pretty funny. I can't believe I called Rythian “sharp as a baseball.” He could have sworn that the thief had been none

The night was young and the full moon shone brightly on a small bar called Calaveras. The people inside the bar were loudly and happily chatting about the festival that would take place the next day. Everybody was laughing, dancing, drinking, and having a good time. All except the small group huddled at a table that was wedged into the back corner of the bar. The three sitting at the table had something more sinister in mind. “So...” said Sombra as she sat back in her chair, having just finished a recap of her plans, “once the riots start, that should give you two plenty of cover to escape.” The two men sitting oppo